UPDATE 10/12/2009:
-Modified some glitches here and there
-Modified one instrument towards the end
-Modified some melodies
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Here's the full version of what I uploaded (and deleted) yesterday.
I didn't have my headphones with me when I made this song, so I'm not too sure if it sounds the way I wanted it to sound =___=.
Anyway, I hope you guys like it ^__^.
Hmm.
Great intro.
My feeling is that this song should have stayed as an ambient track. Though I understand the feeling you were going for, it just relaxed me so much at the beginning of the song I didn't want to the song to end. Then when the trancey stuff came it in kind of woke me up from my pleasant slumber.
Maybe make a version 2? Just ambience? Just for me? :).
-Aaron.
I ruined it after the intro =__=. I was simply too rash in finishing it, I didn't want to see it rot in my hard-disk.
I'd seriously want to fix it, but I don't have the time lately... but when I will, I'll make it ALL ambience... just for you, lol ^__*.
Ear candy anyone?
Nice buildup from the beginning until 1:40, but your beat really drops in unexpectedly at that point; i think it might have been better had you faded it in more gradually. I did like the way your synths never really took a back-seat to the kick punch beat though (not that I'm a big fan of kick punch, myself).
Really well mastered track, all around and with a great variety of synths that don't get too repetitive. However, at 3:05 you have this one sort-of drum roll and you ramp the volume up for the finale, but if i may humbly suggest trying fruity compressor, i think it might achieve the 'hard' sound you were looking for over that section without having to turn the volume up so much. Anyway, it's a fairly small complaint for 5 seconds out of 4 minutes, so nice work!
I know what you mean *sigh* =__=... I really ruined it from 1:42 onwards...
To be completely honest, I did this song in separate days... the first day was from 0:00-1:42 and the rest was rushed another day (simply because I couldn't stand seeing it rot in my archives). It's a flaw I have which I should fix.
About your suggestion, I'll give Fruity Compressor a try, but before that I should definitely find some tutorials on Youtube or something.
Thanks for your constant tips.
P.S. You're way too kind with the score, btw ^__^.
Awesome!
Needs some work for sure! BUT it's very good.
I imagine one of them scenes in a film where you cant hear anything but it just plays a song. You know the really epicly emotional one lol.
I imagine an alien invasion of Earth and underground scientists working on humanities first spacecraft and some futuristic weaponry.
You missed a serious oppurtunity with this song though. The solemness at the biggen is perfect!
The improvement i can give you is...
Slowly transform the slow sadness of the song into a superduper hyper chase scene DnB style song. I think that would be awesome. It would be perfect if you started to break the hyperness in at 1:42.
You already got it setup for the break-in. Just try it! trust me =O
Yeah, I get what you mean. I noticed that my build-up at 1:42 got ruined by the stuff I put after v__v.
I'd love to say I could do what you said, but I'm pretty bad at DnB... hell, I'm pretty bad at making proper beats in general. (Btw, do you know of a website that might help me with this?)
Anyway, thanks for the advice. If I'll ever have time (and inspiration) I'll try and give this song some DnB personality.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
SFaPiL2 
