Good writing for this style.

As far as the composition for this style goes, this is quite appealing. I have nothing more to say there.

The mixing certainly needs work. The volumes seem off for this style.

-Starting with the reverse cymbal: I'd take the volume down a small increment (something comfortable for the ears) and if I could increase the pitch some more so there wasn't a low rumble for the cymbal (yuck), I'd go for that too.

-Bass synth: a tad too loud, take it down in volume.

-Bass kick: needs a compressor on it definitely. Can't even hear the kick drum as loud as I think it should be.

-Lead synths: perfect volume, nice.

-Rest of drums: way too quiet.

-Also, as far as panning goes, the panning is missing. Imagine a stage and where each sound is coming from according to what you think, and then pan according.

-I hope I have helped, if you have any questions, let me know!

-ImperfectDisciple

-I am also working on something, care to check it out?

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/296420

very cool

like the bass and beat
and the leads
5/5
check out some of my new stuff if you can

Go for Hardstyle

You should continue with a Hardstyle Shuffle and/or HardJump. Please let me know when you do have it up.