generic

Ok the song is VERY VERY simple i could play the main powerchords without any trouble at all and whats worse is the power chords you are using are so generic that ive heard them in a billion attempts at people making songs and calling them punk your guitar also sounds like crap the only part that sounded remotely ok were the harmonics just for refrence how high is your gain set to because i find that high gain in punk songs doesnt sound that great your solo first of all you can barely hear it solos are supposed to stand out second its not in the beat third i dont think it goes with the overall style oh and add an effect to give it more of a sense of depth dont just pick your insanely slow solo with single notes also make it longer And my most important piece of advice BE CRITICAL! think to yourself would i love this song if i hadnt made it would i want to sing to it if it had lyrics also get an outside opinion Oh one final thing a melody would go with it well over the rythm and give it more of a sense of individuality make sure its high enough so the rythm only seems like its in the background