I'm not a musician or anything so I can't pick this apart as well as others so I won't as such would not be very helpful....
What I can say is that as a general listener, and of the majority of non musical minds, this is awesome! I love the techno beat, for somereason reminds of the battle on the bridge lol (when you fight Gilgamesh on FF5).
So my rating may not be based on how well it's put together musically or whatever, but it IS based on how awesome it sounds, which is more important in my mind lol
Elf, I presume? :V
And yeah, honestly, I don't really have much of people telling me if I did something right. Usually it's like LOL YOU DID THIS WRONG AND IT SUCKS and stuff. So hearing a LOLAWESOME comment made me really happy about this song, since, you're the only person out of the 50 not-NG people who have heard this to say anything about it. :V
And yeah, I wrote this after listening to battle on the bridge, so I accidentally stole the chord. D: