Good, now stop trying ot hit me and hit me.
This is pretty cool, I see that you're using garage band-- That's one of my favorite drum loops. BUT GOODNESS don't use it for the whole song! change it up! You're doing a really good job though, you should keep practicing. I bet within a year you'll have some really good stuff up here.
uhh... okay so my real review: This is okay, I see that you have a lot of original ideas, they're fresh, but you've got to work on your composition. This piece is pretty boring after the first minute or so of material. One contributor to this is the fact that you use the same drum loop through the whole song, another thing is that you don't use your sound space to its fullest extent, you kind of stay right in the mid-range spectrum with sort of blendy synths. I don't know exactly how to put it, but everything kind of warps together after 0:24.
My supreme advice of what you should do: MAAaakkkee mOooaaarrr
Practice makes perfect. Back in '08 I was garage banding on NG too, now I'm in full swing with FL studio, compare my first and latest songs if you want a better idea. Keep working on that midi-editor thingy to make your own melodies, you're on your way.
I liked it.