here are just a couple riffs i was fooling around with. I'm thinking about making a full song with them, tell me how you like them, and if you've heard these riffs or something very similar to them in some other song please tell me. I dont want to accidentally steal someone's riff.
thanks
also if they are complete and utter shit, dont hesitate to tell me so.
Try to be a bit more creative
I like the sound of the riff, it seems like metalcore sorta. I've heard riffs like that somewhere down the road of my journey through music. Try listening to some good bands to give you an idea of how your riffs could be improved. Still good though :)
thanks for the review,
I may revise the riff, but ive thought about it and ill probably not use this riff.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
tom5coat 
popolamusic 
