Definitely meets my approval!
I very much like this track, both for its calmer, ambient aspects, and its simultaneous igh-energy beat. I could definitely see this being used as an actual dance song at some introvert-gamer rave party, absolutely.
I like that everything blends together well, as the original song did. You've actually made me want to remix my own version of this song, now! Yours definitely beats mine, hands down. Kudos to you for a masterful track.