Has a lot of potential.
I think that with a bit of cleaning up, someone else on vocals *sorry*, this could be a really sweet song. Again, even though this isn't what I'd normally consider my favorite taste in music, it has style.
thanks, i know my voice isnt that great, but i dont really know anyone else who can sing well.. maybe ill put a sign up in my local coffe shop (not starbucks though, fuck them). ive been trying to develop my style more and more with instruments and i feel that im really starting to reach where i want to be. Then again, i try to look at it like theres a huge field of growth in front of me and i can improve.
thanks for your approval :)