I like the basic layout of the song, but it could honestly use a lot more drums.
Also, the effect around 1:05 where it built up was nice and i think you should use that more and make it a bit more intense, because i think alot of people listen to techno because of its intens-ness and how it almost, you could say, traps you in its melody....
Speaking of melody, in most techno songs i hear generally only have one (maybe two) meldoys that just play the whole time throughout the song then they just build off of that. idk if that helps its just what i noticed.
Well, i think its a great start, so keep up the great work and PM me if you need any Advice.
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