Overall it's not bad..
But you should really improve it
1. The Bass at 02:32 is peaking
2. The melody is getting boring by the time
Well other than that, it's an good song
3/5 --- 6/10
Keep up mate
Oh by the way, i would like a review on my newest song "Above the sea"
yeah im using a new program and am getting the feel to it , thanks anyway tho
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.