not too shabby
yet another good piece of yours. once again, I only have one issue with it. to me, it feels as if it's lacking substance. it could do with more instruments, or more on the melody, something to kick it up a notch. other than that, it's great, so keep it up
Thanks for the review!
I've been working on the issues you pointed out in other songs I'm currently making (not for Newgrounds, yet...), and I hope to have fixed them.
I made this using a midi keyboard, but I found out that I'm not too good at creating melodies with a keyboard, so I've gone back (back as in, before I started submitting stuff on Newgrounds) to actually writing music with notes and such :p
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