A Cookie for You. XD
I have to agree with Dromedary on this - it's nice when the beat is simple, but when you revert to the more complex model, it gets a little iffy and feels like you've taken away from the song. It's still pretty good, though.
The start is a really good.
A nice snappy beat at the start, which is good. Then you move onto more complex beats, which don't go quite as well with the first part, but when you drop it back to the first beat again, it's great. Personally, I think this could be the intro to a song. Try and work with a vocal artist.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.