good

i prefer the 2nd half but the first is good too. sounds like 2 completly different songs

Good job

Great for my subwoofers, XD. Nice work though, and yes, it is pretty loud.

Melody needs work

I love industrial and this is a great track--thank you. The melody, however, all the way up to about 1:12 when it stops, is simplistic, repetitive, and too clean both in its progression and the actual sound. After that, I can really hear the machines of industry grinding away and the track picks up, although it would be nice to add onto it after this, perhaps a more rhythmic section with bass, etc.

Nice

[From the post below] Make whatever you like, get a feel for everything and work from there. I feel your 'Industrial' is quite a work of art. I love it! 5/5

Eminent

Keep it heavy and dirty, this is awesome. Industrial music is tricky, but you got it down to a tee here.