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Uploaded
Sep 29, 2009 | 9:42 PM EDT
File Info
Song
768.3 KB
50 sec
Score
2.07 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 2.07 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
415 Plays | 41 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Video Game
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Author Comments

I'm not sure what this is missing but I know its missing something
Maybe you could help out and give me a couple pointers.

Thanks - TheGrayK

Reviews


SteakandKidneyPieSteakandKidneyPie

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not bad

its was okay, not the best, but i wish i could play guitar. Doesn't suit the background musik. What happened to rock.


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TheGrayK responds:

Hmm im not exactly sure what you mean by what happened to rock.
but thank you any way.


thumbsupguythumbsupguy

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Pointers

The song has some potential, but right now it's kind of hard to find the downbeat. I'm not sure if the downbeat is with the melody when it comes back in at 00:10 or if it's with the bass drum. Try placing the drum beats on 1 and 3 or 2 and 4 to start off. Then, try adding in some other bass beats on the "and" counts between the quarter note beats.

Also, try making the tempo changes more smooth. They currently seem too abrupt for this piece.

Something that is missing from this piece would be a bass instrument to back up the melody. It will fill some of the empty space.

Keep working on music! The more practice, the better!


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TheGrayK responds:

Thanks I really appreciate your review.
I have very little experience in writing music I pretty much don't know how to read it but I can kind of make out what your trying to tell me. And I will definitely smooth out the tempo change.
Again Thank you so much for the Constructive feedback.
It is truly appreciated.

-TheGrayK