the synth doesn't really follow the drums really well and sounds out of sync, when you have the guitar come in, it seems a little bit to distorted ( or not enough) the drums are a little too basic for industrial imo, the stuff you have going on at 1:37 sounds pretty good, what you start going with from 3:00 and on just all sounds really out of whack, if you were aiming for some wierd stuff, you did pretty well, although the little breathing effect was done nicely though.
Yes its called a noise breakdown. I want to bring back old school industrial and mix it with the new school and add whatever elements i feel like adding. I'm not trying to sound like everyone else, that would be too boring. But I appreciate the feedback.
a very smooth transition from chilled hip hop sounding beat to industrial mayhem- i like