hahaha nice! some mixing suggestions first--1) its good to keep the vocals a little more centered. it seemed to spaced out a lot of the time. 2) maybe raise the level on the vocals a bit more too, because it seemed to compete a little too much with the background. otherwise, good job on the mix.
i thought you did an overall good job with this remix. its a really simplistic melody, so it comes off as a good anthem, though too uninteresting to have any real lasting value. it would do well in a club setting though. as a suggestion...
1) find some more interesting transitions between sections than silences and reversed cymbals. thats fine once or twice, but it gets boring after a while.
2) try adding more auxiliary percussion like another hat line, bells, shakers, tambourines, whatever. it would add some depth to teh song, and fill out the high end of the spectrum a bit (right now it feels very bass heavy).
3) try sidechaining the bass with the pattern that you currently have against the bass drum. i know sidechaining is trite and all, but it seems like it would work well in this situation.
gj overall though, its a solid submission.
Oi! thanks for the response. ive been trying to figure out what this was missing and its definitely transition. along with more percussion. which will be definitely be added in the final version. Lol i had a hard time adding the MP3 to FL8 Studio for some reason. it didnt seem to work as well as FL7. But i got over it. and converted it to Wav. to get the Acapella in. i actually did it when i was drunk as hell so yea i realized that the vox were off a tad. but thats changed since this version. id upload it but fuck it. i'll upload the final version and thats that. this is a WIP.. thanks for the suggestions tho. definintely taking them into consideration when finishing this project. Cheers man.
This is really good..great work!
Keep it up!
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Cheers! glad you like it.
sure i'll check some of your stuff out.
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Yea dude shit's catchy.... i let it play like 4 times
if you like dubstep you could bring yourself to check out my new track at the hotel. >_>
For bored-ness, its cool. nice synths, good production, bass in particular, and it actually loops properly. Lol. Is that sidechaining I hear? Good work altogether mate, will be looking out for the full version if it is ever made oO
Oh the full version will be made. im just workin on the vocals right now. and trying to add some Variation to not make it boring. There will be a final.. thanks for listening. Thanks for liking,
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