the original is better
This on is o.k, but the original is better. This one is kinda chopy and out of tune. Its faster, too. It sounds like you added some notes too. You made it so...flashy. The flashyness reduced the quality. If you could submit the original version, that would be great! I would, but I don't know how. (I'm only 10!XD) Thanks!
Julie (a.k.a vab58)
I personally don't think its as good as your others but its pretty good. It seems halloweenish and scary and its just mysterious and stuff good work. :D
lol thats fine...this is actually an anime opening theme...elfen lied....o.o alot of ppl die in this anime xD
anyways thx for the review
You have an okay melody in there (just not catchy enough) and a good drumbeat too, It just needs to either equalize the bass synth and improve the quality and fix up the distortion of the bass and please don't put in so much phaser/flanger (whatever you use in fl studio, they give the same effect). Also, try to make it less repetitive and put some more background melodies and sounds and pretty much just master it.
It may look like I zerobombed it but I just have a high voting disposition, no I didn't give it a zero, this song doesn't deserve near zero.
Sorry about the overly long criticism, It's just that whenever I am giving a review a low score, I MUST put alot of criticism in there. so yeah...
thanks for the review...dont worry i saved the song and im gonna remix it alot to make it great ^^...i just love the song so i wanted to mix it...but i will definatly remaster it