YOU GOT TALENT WOW!
Too much Bass
This sounds like it was done on FLStudio, whatever the case, next time you do it, remeber, not everyone has uber speaker systems, like clubs, I'm listening on headphones, and there is just too much bass during your melody section, it's overwhelming.
Decent though, but next time remeber if this is for a club, you want those people to be dancing to a steady rhythym, your is a bit too choppy and stops to much.
Oops.. sorry, its the gay DrumLoops.. Over And Out... The bass in it.. i know its overwhelming,i didnt think it would sound like that on my speakers.. cuz i got headhones too... sorry dude :(