The clap sound seems a little too loud, the first melo-synth that's playing seems a bit too much out of tune, the melo is alright, reminds me of yankee-doodle, the light0ambient sounds really add to this track, at 1:09, the synth that comes in is a little too aggresive and dark to fit the rest of the song, and the back-synth is too loud on the highs.
Thanks, I appreciate an objective critique now n' then!
The pad @ 0:32 and Sub-Synth that rolls in @ 1:09 will be the base harmony-
I'll have to get the other synths and tints in order- not sure what melody i'll fit in-
Basically shat a few different patterns together to see.
I'll refer to your points when and If i get around to a proper mix.
heres a F-INCREDIBLE track by Silkie