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Sep 28, 2009 | 12:42 PM EDT
File Info
Song
6.4 MB
4 min 41 sec
Score
4.38 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 4.38 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
2,108 Plays | 127 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Drum N Bass
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Author Comments

Well, this is it. My first completed song made in FL9 :D
Making tunes is so much easier now, simply due to the fact that I can save, take a break for a while and then come back. Rather than worrying about some bull sh!t happening to my comp while using the demo version...

You may see another version of this song, a VIP or something. And now that I can go back and change things up feel free to leave me some constructive criticism. I'd love to get this song to 110% :)

As always, thanks for listening and I hope guys enjoy it :)

Reviews


StarFoxxStarFoxx

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Yes, yes, yes!

You aew someone born to make DnB songs. You should only try to improve the melody, make it a bit better. The rest of the song is like 'Yeah!!'. 9/10, 5/5


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Melophobik responds:

Well, damn! Thanks for the compliment, man! I'll see what I can do with this one...


Flared24Flared24

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

could be so much better

this could be so much better than it already is. your synth has such a good melody, but your bass has such a plain noise. it really contradicts to everything else. i would suggest stretching it out a bit, making it smoother and adding some low-rate lfo on it

whenever your drop is supposed to be, i suggest using rides or open hats to accent the amen break. it would sound so much better with it, i promise. maybe adding some incredibly low overdrive on those drums could be good as well.

try to remove all that reverb, as well. if you add some background noises, then put reverb on it. your synth especially doesn't need it, and the volume should be a lot higher since it's so important

violent content haha


Melophobik responds:

Thanks man! Especially for all your tips n' what-not.

It's feels like it's been forever since I made this song... My computer broke down a couple days after I finished it, so no revisions could, or have been made.
If I ever do get my computer fixed I will turn this song into something awesome :D
I've learned a few new tricks and I could really fix it up with some tinkering.


ZolzerZolzer

Rated 4 / 5 stars

this has some violent content.

i like it, even though its really not my taste in DnB. please check out my latest work in progress 'Monarch' and msg me with your MSN if you want to add me :) we could do a collab.......


Melophobik responds:

Thanks man, and aright! This ought to be interesting...
I'll msg u as soon as I can :)


ThepivotgunThepivotgun

Rated 5 / 5 stars

you got!!

hey i made a newgrounds account just to say that everyseacond of this song kept me bobbin my head and i liked it so much i wanted to listen too it twice... i think the reason people were saying anything bad was because that the catagory you put it under doesnt fully agree with the song ..... this is a good song but it doesnt belong under drum and bass


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Melophobik responds:

Wow, thanks a lot man! That means a lot :)

I think there are some parts that aren't exactly something from a typical Drum and Bass song but I'm pretty sure it's still got enough elements of Drum and Bass in there for it to be considered one. If not, it's closer to Drum and Bass than any other genre here on the ol' NG :/


SteakJohnsonSteakJohnson

Rated 5 / 5 stars

This is really cool.....!

the only thing i wanna hear is some crazy bass cutoff automation,(but i reaally like the pitch gliding)
Good song, I have yet to compleetly complete one. Add some crazy cool atmospheric effects too!


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Melophobik responds:

Thanks man! I think you're right about the atmospheric effects. Those are always a nice addition to a song. And I've been working on a song that has some 'crazy bass cutoff', or I had been until my computer got completely screwed...
But yeah, thanks for the review and the advice. Hopefully I can get back to work on this song soon.