the keyboard melody is a good one, and I like the almost samba-esque backing. it just seeps that the two sometimes work and sometimes clash.
Very nice vibe
I can definitely dig this, not exactly my style, but for what I think you're aiming for, it's fantastic. 10/10!
It's not bad.
I still like it, but Color my world is amazing!!
I like your other song way better.. play more piano less keyboard! :]
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.