Hahahaha, I had NO idea what this was about. Your voices are funny, but you always seem like you're containing yourself and not going as openly crazy as you should, like you're trying to be quiet so you sound a little but strained. Also your timing is a little bit mellow but other than that, your mixing is great and I liked it.
You have a good ear, my friend. I always have to restrain from yelling since it causes echo in the room and makes it sound just like I am in a room, lol. I do need to push m voice and do crazier stuff. And I'm glad you couldn't figure out the plot. I totally didn't have one. :) Thanks Leech. I'll whip up something super good just for you, next time around.
Final Results for Voice ACting Contest :U
FINAL SCORE AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES - 71
First off, this is my second favorite so far out of all the entries, and i have seen almost all of them. I thought it was so funny and cute and the way you purposely sounded like a girl trying to sound like a guy narrator made me laugh. They main thing that you need to work on is the acting. I could tell you were having fun with this lol, so you trailed off and kind of lost the acting in teh characters, They sounded more silly and random than good acting characters. but there were tons of very well done lines that got you some major points. Your a good voice actor when it comes to these cute characters, but you should try to get as INTO the character as possible. I liked the range you had, all of them sounded squeaky and cute but you still managed to make them sound different. I LOVED THE STORY!!! Attack by food? BRILLIANT! Its like that powerpuff girls episode haahah. -86
Acting = 30
Fit = 25
Originality = 15
Range = 10
Mixing = 7
This was very well acted with lots of very entertaining characters. The narrator's voice was a bit weak, and there seemed to be a bit of a struggle with Butch's voice. However, the overall piece has whole a lot of charm! The music/sfx was a little loud in places, swamping the characters voices and there were a few pauses which slowed the piece done. But it was well acted and I hope to hear more from this super family!
Stephanie Young (Jessismith):
Jones Family VA Contest Entry
Stephanie Young (Jessismith):
Jones family VA contest entry
Acting - 14/35
Fit - 17/25
Originality - 10/15
Range - 10/15
Mixing - 9/10
The cutest performance I have ever heard. However some voices seemed a little forced but overall very funny!
THANKS FOR ENTERING!!!
Yay! Thanks fatkid! And thanks to all the rest of you wonderful judges. You rule! :D
Some advice :D
your script was very creative, and made me very hungry! it had a ditsy cute feel that could only be given by you! :D a really wonderful feeling of being there was the result of your mixing! where admitedly your performance was a little to quiet at parts, and your low narrator/man voice did sound really forced and unnatural, and assumedly especially uncomfortable to perform! hehe, so it jus shows how hard you where trying! :D your range was impressive as usual, and the general acting performance was quite good :D
only you could pull off a convincing battle between random cute characters VS the vegetable crusade. KEEP IT UP! i loved the grandma voice. well done, thanks so much for submitting! and you are pure awesome :D
Well, my voice is naturally dry and airy, so don't worry, it wasn't so uncomfortable to put on a lower raspier voice. :) This was actually really fun to make....I made it just for fun anyway. You're pure awesome too just for reviewing. I've been awaiting your awesome review for a long time. Thanks so much Stag. *huggles* I'll keep it up, as long as I know someone else likes it. :)
Sweet dude! Now I know that you really easy can make boyish voice *freaky*.
It's hard, but with much effort, I can. xD Thanks G. Glad as always you liked it. :)
Damn, you gotta lotta talent.
Thank you Westies. :) You're awesome.
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