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another track ive been tweeking for the past few weeks. lemme know whatcha think.

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would face of made a beter title?

OK, listen! i ain't gonna use any big words to make you think i'm a wiz when it comes to reviewing. because i can just write it at the end. and i ain't gona give you advice that will completely change the feeling of the track. i'm just doing this because ive got nothing to do from 5 to 8. Oh and don't take any of this shit personnaly because i just love to help awesome artists that are willing to put there work of arts free on the internet make there songs beter. i'm probably borring your ass off by writin this so might as well get to the review. oh and one more thing, i'm not always write: your the one who descided if i am or not because after all, its your song.

REVIEW STARTS HERE: (could i of made that any more obvious)
The entry:
oh the classic! a good entry is what keeps thoes treasure hunters from pressing the back button on there internet browser. well it's not always the case but i think this is how all dnb should start like: Fast, loud, and full of energy.
But dude... admit it! you took the beginning from more - Junkie XL didnt you?
HA! you sneaky bastard!

The melody:
For you, i think this could of whent beter: the melody it's self is good but the instrument is lacking a real bass sound that could of made the song sound alot more powerfull. same goes to the drums.

The drums:
as i said, the drums are lacking power. and just three samples just don't cut it. you musnt forget that the drums are as important as the bass in a dnb. after all that's why we call it drum and bass, not just bass... not just that, but the kick sample doesn't even sound like a real kick... it's not long or powerful enough.

The ending:
who cares? isn't that the whole point of an ending?

well any way i also have to agree with boomer raid... it's really not that hard to make a song longer... just try looping certain parts of the song and voila...

Cette critique vous est apporter par votre critique canadien preferer... malheureusement, il ne peut se montrer puisqu'apres tout nous somme sure l'internet ou tous est accessible a tout le monde. (if you guessed russian you are official a complete cultural retard.)

cya folks!
oh and plz comment. im trying to refine my reviewing skills...

MmmCake responds:

Wow OMG! Thanks for the review!! :D:D
Never heard of Junkie XL before, but if you mean the "YEAH" sample then it very well could've been (I'm not totally sure where I got it xD).
you review skills are great, its excellent how you break it down into instruments and song sections.
the problem with the kick drum was distortion, i made it as powerful as possible without sounding bubbly (yeah, that's something I really gotta work on.)

Yeah, I can tell it's french, but my question to you is "¿Cómo bien le puede hablar en Español?".

Thanks again!!! :D:D

A good start

It's a good start for a DnB track: an intense quick start to a slow transition, then back to the major kick.

I'm just wondering if you bring the slow transition first, then when the guy says "YEA!" the kick comes in right afterwards. Why? Because, it anticipates the entire tune before the main melody come in. Once it does you can extend it for a little longer, while bringing in another melody as a counterpoint and make it more interesting as the tune progresses.

Here's a question I've been always asking artists in the DnB scene- can you make this song longer? Not long as in too long, but about 4-5 mins?

MmmCake responds:

thanks for the review!! yeah, ill definitely try those ideas out, and mebbe upload the result, but it could take a while as i'm pretty busy atm. i'll also try to make it that 4-5 mins (i'm always up for a challenge :D)!

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Uploaded
Sep 24, 2009
8:16 PM EDT
Genre
Drum N Bass
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4.3 MB
2 min 21 sec

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