like it if you want to check out mine its called(one more goal)
graboy's right, the vocals are soft but is sounds good!
Its a good song, kind of sounds like the beatles for some reason... just make the vocals a bit louder, you can barely hear them.
Don't record a live version.
Take it into the studio, edit it to balance everything, then perfect it. After that is done, it might make some nice hits.
its like an old rock mixed with bad vocals srry i just didnt like the quality of em yno but other than that real good
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.