DJY[Over the line]Original mix

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This is my original mix. Everything is by me! Made this in fl studio 9 xxl.
Mastering was good in this, but its lack of effects.. Im not very good at effects thats why its lack of it!
Sorry guys/gals for not adding more effects.
Btw if you have trouble listening to it, it might be me as i saved this as 128kbps not 160 because i must compress this into a smaller version so that i can psot it at newgrounds for u people to listen!
I really hope u enjoy this song and push this song all the way to top 5 of the week. ^^ appreciate it :D

Tittle: Over the line [Original mix]


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Stupid fucking shortcuts that make you do things that you don't want to do. (Unknown close-tab shortcut) I did not want to close the tab. It took me about 14 seconds to get back to the page. I loved the song early on when the drums kicked in. Its enough to catch someone's attention right off the bat! In fact, I stood up and immediately searched my house for the girl, but she was nowhere to be found. I just needed someone to dance with. I settled on nobody. Oh well!

Let me just throw a cool line in here: This song isn't just "whatever good". Its "Awesomely spectacular".

One piece of personal advice, not really a critique. I would've liked the stuff going on around the 6:00 mark to have been more extensive. And a more powerful build up would have been fantastically fabulous!

Nice work! I like the fact that its a completely original composition, I can tell you put plenty of effort into this. Keep it upppp =)

DjYeoh responds:

Alright thank you very much for ur review, glad you like the song and yeap, i've put in almost 110% of hard work! mostly on an average of 105-108%


I love the bass sound, and it sounds like you did a great job on the effects.
The melodies are simple but catchy, which is always good.
The only thing i think is bringing it down at this point is the mastering, (the bass drum cuts in on the bass line, you can the compressor dropping the volume on the low frequencies every time the bass drum beats in the busyer parts of the song)
Maybe try higher attack rates in the compressor, or try to have the bass line operate just above the frequencies of the bass drum.
keep up the great stuff, this one's going to be on my car-driving-music selection!

DjYeoh responds:

hahahha have a save trip while listneing! dont get too crazy with the melody and basses hehehe :) Take care!


Nice mastering dude you're open hat sounds too over compressed though dude also your melody can use some work agian. But nice sounds it got much much better near the end

DJ Frosted

DjYeoh responds:

Thanks man! over compressed? ah... i used 2 compressor for the presets ahahaha maybe thats the problem :/ aight thanks for the info!

Nice OMG!

Dang it dude, you passed the Line!


LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE you too... tho im not homo... xD

DjYeoh responds:

hahahaha Thanks! glad you're not 1 ahahaha glad you really like it!

its pretty tight

i like it

DjYeoh responds:

Thank you

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4.85 / 5.00

Sep 24, 2009
5:51 AM EDT
File Info
6.9 MB
7 min 35 sec

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