Become a supporter


Share Download this song

Author Comments

One of the first songs I've done with a drum kit and a monotone synth that I edited by changing the pitch. So, excuse the lame beginning and enjoy my first upload; Nephelheim!


Not bad. Not bad at all...

Intro was certainly interesting and it got my attention quite welll cos i ust couldn't wait to hear how it'd continue. However, even though transition from intro to main melody wasn't that great, u did a good job of mixing the instruments together to get the great blend u have now.

Still, the background was a bit repetitive even though build up to the climax was great with a fantastic outro to top it all off.

Overall, this is a agreat piece of music but some negatives i mentioned got ur pts down to 8. Work more on this and u'll have urself a winner ;)

-Review Request Club-

Centrist responds:

After giving it another listen, I know what you mean I'll see what I can do to give it a little boost. ^^

Thanks for another awesome review!

Interesting introduction

Well, it's certainly a very good tune, but the introduction just feels so out of place, I couldn't even see them as being the same tune. It certainly fits the industrial genre and you've worked a very nice beat and melody into a powerful, robust little tune here.

I think that the melody could give way to the counter-melody slightly in places, or perhaps it's just an indication that you need to calm the counter melody down a little. I'm sure that sitting and puzzling through it will help with this, but I can't personally put my finger on which of the two variables needs changing.

[Review Request Club]

Centrist responds:

Well, before I got to NG, I used to make songs like every day. I uploaded the best I had, and I forgot to edit them before said upload. The problem I have is when I start a song, I do no pre-planning. I start off with dabbling around and doing something that I think sounds funky or cool, then I just build and build. Everything you hear from me I come up with right on the spot as I make it. Whether or not that's a good thing, I'll never know, but I generally just run with what I have. :]

Thanks for the review!

Slow intro, awesome song

Yeah, the intro is indeed too long and too slow. You may want to cut it down a bit, because the song that follows is actually pretty amazing. Very hard drums and melodies, I can imagine people would really like to dance to this in a disco. The song is full of energy and I guess it makes people want to dance.

So yeah, try to find a better intro. :)

{ Review Request Club }

Centrist responds:

Okey dokie. I'll see what I can do about that. ^^

~ Review Request Club ~

Ha, yeah the beginning made me wonder about how the end result of this song was going to be, but it actually ended up quite good. So the beginning was a tad bit slow like you already know, but it almost adds to the effect that you get when the song starts to kick off.

The song had a good amount of variety and was done very well. Congrats on the first upload and I've decided to help your score a bit as it was actually well below two before I voted. O.o

~ Review Request Club ~

Centrist responds:

Haha, it's fun making intros to songs that make no coherent sense.

But all in all, thanks for the review. :]

To be honest, I know it's not the best thing ever, but I don't know if it deserved a 1.(something or other).


Thanks again!

Click on an icon to vote on this!

Credits & Info


3.35 / 5.00

Sep 23, 2009
2:19 PM EDT
File Info
6 MB
3 min 18 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.