Good job here, really liked it. Though I really liked the beat here, it sounded like it was a main component of the melody, it was catchy and wasn't to loud or soft, the perfect beat, good job with that. The melody was good as well, catchy and ear-pleasing as well as bouncy, the drums were the best component to it in my mind, really added the extra push needed to make the song sound great, good job with that. Excellent work here, 5/5 from me, keep it up! :3
Its pretty good
First part is the best, but it sounds like its trying to be too many things at once.
I am not gonna lie, but yeah I would that is true. I couldn't think of much to do after that. Last time I do a song after pulling an all nighter.