I have lead pants syndrome
I like the phrasing in the lead, the tone, however, has too much mid, I would bring that up a bit. I know that this is almost like committing blasphemy, but I think that your lead tone could use less distortion, and maybe add a touch more reverb to wet that bitch up a little more. Again the compositional quality was good, a bit linear, but that is just fine for this type of piece.
This song is creepy, and I digg it.