hey, this track is nice! (i'm A-Bot #2 this week by the way. thanks for reviewing mine!). i don't think this is worse than my piece at all, it sounds very good. the beginning sounds very trance-ish, and seeing that most of your other songs are mostly trance, it gives this song a bit of your own flavor, very nicely done. a little more variation after the main beat comes in would be cool, but otherwise it's perfect. good job, keep it up!
Nice an clean, good overall balance of texture. I dont think you need to change a thing about this song (besides make it longer).
Congrats on A-bot's third place. This wasn't a bad piece but it definitely felt like it was missing something in places... I voted '4' on this piece - it was a great track but it was missing the excitement and interest that would've rated a 5.
Perhaps a little bit of reverb before the drums kick in would help give it some body -
Don't get the wrong idea - I'm NOT trying to trash your work - it IS very good - I'm only trying to give as honest of a review as I can.
Hope to hear more from you!
best house track
It was smooth all the way to the end, perfect song to dance to with a girl
a nice slow house beat, very well done