It's really not that bad.
The melody about 1/4 way in is way too random and fast. The snare layered with the lead is also annoying. It's an okay start for a battle song, maybe just add some more variation and melody.
To make a long story short, it could use alot of work D:
thank you for leaving a review
i will work on that i just started making music a while ago and i still need to learn the ropes. i could really use someone to teach me to make things in music or atleast someone to look to for help.
thanks again for review and i will do what you said.