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Of a coin (p/teddygram)

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Beat by: Teddygram (thanks for the musical therapy bro)

Lyrics:

-Verse 1-
I never knew what I had, till she was gone
The girl made me a man, she put strength in my arms
She was the weight in heart, my spark of inspiration
The way we talked, I got lost in conversation
I would listen to her giggle as I nibbled on her neck
I would tickle her, her laugh put a pep in my step
Yet, when it came time to tell her how I feel
I locked myself in; reinforced the seal
I couldn't let anyone in, insecure with my emotions
I was afraid to show another soul measure of devotion
She knows this, that never stopped her from caring
On a daily basis, she carried a smile worth sharing
She wore for a stranger, she wore is for her neighbors
When she wore it for me, she turned my heart into vapour
The nature of what love is, is making me plummet
something about these assumption is breaking my functions
but I love it

-Hook-
Hey girl, lets flip the coin
Natural beauty, or a plastic toy
Hey lady, lets roll the dice
Spiritual commitment or one night price

2 sides of a coin, so whats it gon be
the woman in my dreams, or the lady on her knees

-Verse 2-
There's a lot of girls I'd fuck, but not many that I trust
There's few I can't stand, but I'll be damned by lust
I can look by not touch
but not much, keeps me from completely fucking this up

A stupid slut is always corrupting my views and visions
She tells me I'm a drug, she's got a love addiction
All she wants is my dick, so I give her an asshole
"SHUT THE FUCK BITCH! You're acting irrational"
You can kiss my ass with that one more chance bullshit
You won't get this last dance, I'm off to the mosh pit
I'll explode from rage, n' displace my anger
I hate you face, your voice and every damned curve
You're fake from your toes to your teeth
I know you're a hoe with a cold personality
You're my enemy, That's all you'll ever be to me
So fuck off bitch, start moving your feet, please.

-outro-

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check it

ima do my own track this weekend to this same beat and ill post it lets see where it goes

MaoDaMighty responds:

Go for it, let me know when you upload it.

Noice!

Sup I wrote a big ass review on this an then NG failed 2 send it .... anyways it basically said yea like everyones been sayin your flow is improvin, always slick to me. a downlooooooad. keep up the good work man, the lyrics are real.
First verse really had me - comes off strong an the hook is a good thought.

Hey girl, lets flip the coin
Natural beauty, or a plastic toy
Hey lady, lets roll the dice
Spiritual commitment or one night price'

noice man. noice.

Stay Strong !

MaoDaMighty responds:

Thanks man, I'm glad you were able to leave your words. Keepin it strong.

Again

I sound like a fucking broken record, but your flow is improving with every song. Verses sound good man. That shit on the hook has to go though. I'm sorry, but that doesn't work at all. I appreciate the effort in trying new things, but this was no a successful experiment.

But those verses, damn man. You're getting really good at writing. Keep it up!

MaoDaMighty responds:

Thanks for the constant reinforcement man, I really appreciate it. As for the hook; I value you opinion on it, however, I kind of like how it turned out. I tried to sing the hook, it didnt have that impact I was going for, so I put a "See Saw" flang on it. I've been trying to write more about me and situations Im going through; the line just feel more geniune to me. Again, thats for the comment.

pretty good

The flows were good and very well written! The chorus sounds like it has potential, but its hard to make out. What kind of mic are ya using these days? hehe. Keep it up!

MaoDaMighty responds:

Thanks man! Im using the same mic I've been using for the last couple of months.

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Uploaded
Sep 20, 2009
11:32 AM EDT
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2.5 MB
2 min 44 sec

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