It doesn't loop very well...
This is very easy to fix though. If you use FL, that is. When you export the file, look to the left of the box with the settings such as Info, Quality..Etc. See looping mode? The default setting is "leave remainder". Change it to "wrap remainder" and it should loop better.
As for the actual melody? It was very nice.
you really help me and glad you like my melody =]
If you wanna hear abother version same song just put choir