Wow! I see you tried again! This is great man. I really liked the floating synths and that crunchy snare in the back. I agree, people should submit vocals as much as music, They would get used!!
Taking some time off? Havn't submitted anything in a month.
I like this track alot. You synched up the vocals pretty well. I think what could have made this a little cooler is when he says "and it SHOWS and it SHOWS and it SHOWS" you could have dropped in a few sounds when he says shows and dropped the beat a little bit. That would have been cool.
9's all around!