Hello guys. This upload is a demo piece of a new song. A longer version with lyrics is on the way but I was wondering what you all thought of it. Feedback is appreciated, Thanks
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There isnt really a prominent beat - which is prime factor in hip hop
the snare is very quiet.
you should make the whole beat louder
add a snare thats louder, and more prominent in the beat
some hi hats woul dbe nice to
as for the melody, its extrememly simple, which is ok, but you may want to change it up more now and then
your on the right path though
-Fayde
Thanks for the constructive feedback and specific feedback! That is just what I was looking for. I'll be sure to incorporate your suggestions in the longer version.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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