That was horrendous... Did you record the guitar and drums separately? Whatever you did, it was bad. Also, your guitar was way out of tune. Don't record with an out-of-tune guitar. It's sloppy and unprofessional. If you're just doing this for fun, disregard the last comment.
(By the way, the review on your other song was a mistake, that one was quite good, I just clicked the wrong link.)
Aah, haha sorry I responded to that review first =P -> thanks.. and yeah.. this one is QUITE bad. But ah well, great improvement in my opinion.
Woah man...what was that...after hearing your song "A spell of irony" i was looking forward to this...im not trying to sound mean here...but what went wrong...? A couple of things to change: -
1. Your guitar was hideously out of tune...that's never a good thing
2. The drums were playing...what seemed like a different song to the guitar..
3. The riffs were all kinda..mumbled together..make the transistions smoother
Im not trying to be mean, you have alot of talent, this song just doesn't show it :s
Lol thanks for the talent comment, I greatly appreciate it. Yeah, I know; this song SUCKS. You can say it =P -> I know it does. But great improvement I think.
ok the guitar was..well ok i guess but the biggest problem was the drums. They sounded way off.You should of chosen a slower more steady beat.
Lol, yeah.. I was pretty lazy with the drums in this one.. but my new one A spell of Irony is great =D -> Thanks to my friend Geraint for recording for me.