That was horrendous... Did you record the guitar and drums separately? Whatever you did, it was bad. Also, your guitar was way out of tune. Don't record with an out-of-tune guitar. It's sloppy and unprofessional. If you're just doing this for fun, disregard the last comment.
(By the way, the review on your other song was a mistake, that one was quite good, I just clicked the wrong link.)