Hmm, I like it. The intro is interesting, I like the drums in the background, and I like how you add new parts, like on 01:19. The drum beat is great throughout the song. I think it should've been a bit more medolic, even though it's good as it is... But I miss a potential bassline, cause it get's repetitive... I like the synth you add at about 06:23, and I'd like to hear synths earlier in the song too :) Pretty good.
Thanks! I keep hoping to make it right.