Nice, but it could be better.
I love the piano so that was a plus for me, also the combination of piano and strings is one of my favorites, so that's another plus.
I think you were smart to use choir in your song but I thought you brought it on too abruptly and overall it was too prominent a component. I was enjoying a nice melody when all of the sudden the choir (that sounded louder that the other components) chimes in. I was actually a little startled at first :P
So you could have made the choir a little more subtle in my opinion. Maybe bring it on a little more gradually and make it quieter through the whole song so it doesn't overshadow the other instruments quite as much.
There were a couple of abrupt stops and starts where I thought there should be something.
Also, right before continuing the main melody after a couple of those abrupt stops you quickly played two notes with the piano. If you know what I'm talking about, they were too quick and didn't quite flow into the next piece. I'd stretch them out a little and try to blend them in with the rest of the song a little better so they're not just sitting out there.
Overall it was a nice piece but it does need some work :) Keep it up!
Thanx man for the nice review, really helped me out, if you want go and check out the result, thanx again !