You kind of overdid the "freeze" thing, and i'm not sure if i'd call it Trance, go to the trance section and listen to some other songs, they usually have quite a high bpm, definitely higher than this, not sure which category this would fit in... Ambient maybe? To me the instruments didn't go together, not horrible, just could have sounded a bit better. The kick needs a lot more bass... i've got nothing coming through my sub right now. Either way you definitely have a future ahead of you in the audio portal, or anywhere else. Just this song, your good, but your other song tips the scales into the great area. Can't decide between 3/5 or 4/5 so I'll give you 4.
Hope I see you flourish here, no doubt you will.