hmm...i can tell
i like it, but it sounds alot like tetris if you ask me. that might be why you're having such a hard time going somewhere with it. it's a cool idea though. has an egyptian sound to it, and if i were you i would add in an echo-ish piano interlude somewhere in it. just throwing ideas out there for yah, the musician's stump is horrible :P i completely understand
btw, could you check out some of my stuff? (not the more rated and voted upon songs please)
thanks!
-lidlurch