invisible observer said it all
great job as far as the composing goes. i would just ask that you make better transitions at 0:33 and 0:36. the gong sounds pretty sick, but it needs something else to go with it. and whats with the fade out at around 0:33? get rid of the silence at the end of the song too. i see potential, but it needs better mixing. i loved the choir part at the beginning, so incorperate that towards the end of the song. i would also add in more of the lively stuff that you made at 0:33 after the slow interlude. the general mix of the song just doesn't seem complete to me. edit this and send me the final draft please! it's pretty awesome already ;)
btw, could you review some of my stuff?
My review, your song.
Song begins playing some of the choirs echo sound, its a bit odd to come in without prior sound input.
Choir and piano noises themselves are quite nice.
0:30 guitar bit should have been longer I think.
0:32 Brass is really foggy in sound and just kind of comes out of no where, but in a very bad way. Its too big of a contrast from the beginning of the song which, kind ofsounds like it has nothing to do with the rest of the song.
0:45-1:20 builds nicely.
1:20 on it slows down, sounds alright, then begins doing some random volume in out thing. Instruments do that, but not that drastically.
End 20 seconds could be cut so there isn't so much silence.
Writing is nice, mix is decent, a bit fuzzy. Instrument sounds are alright, not the most real sounding, and the writing is pretty true to an orchestral style with a few hiccups.
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