dude, you definitely put it into the WRONG GENRE. This isn't techno lol. Please fix that man. People will get you wrong. But on the bright side:
This is a black guy telling you that this is a really good rap song. keep it up bro. I can see this on top weekly 5. You could be a rapstar oneday if you keep THIS up.
But I must tell you. I..AM... SO IMPRESSED for a FIRST submissiont to NG? My first submission wasn't as good at this and it was techno.