Verses remind me of Snoop and are well written. Instrumental sounds a bit olskool. Could use a bit of a facelift on those midi instruments, but writing is on point. Whole song in general is relatable, and the "never wanna die" I'm sure resonates with everyone.
At some points, the singing sounds a bit dispassionate, but I think that may be attributed to falsetto. Vocalist could do well to come out of his shell, so to speak. Not bad, especially for independent music.
I would love if this had some more verses. 2 minutes is not a long time to get to know your flow, and that chorus is nice and fluid.