nothing else to say.
Chords r awsome and durmline is at the perfect dynamic.
1st part is good cuz people get to listen to ur chords.
2nd cuz it has a change in rithym.
3rd part is good cuz of the cresendo and the tempo build.
4th part needs work after the build theres nothing there it needs more energy.
Pease tell me when u think this is going to b finished.
I love this demo i hope the whole thing is this good and ur right so for its ur best
Kewl song man
Really enjoyed the song. Especially the chords, i was really feeling them!
Very shiney! :D haha. There are somethings that I would do differently. It sounds great so far. The kicks and snares at the beginning are weak and don't bring out the power that you're looking for. You need to fix that if you want a this to be amazing. Also when the melody finally kicks in at 1:47... It was kind of disappointing. No high hats or snares? You gotta fix that unless you're still building up into something more incredible and want to build suspense. If you'd like me to take a look at it you can e-mail me the FLP file or you can just take my advice or leave it as it is. It's your creative style and you can do whatever you want to the song.
starts really slow but is not repetitive, that's a good job. Though, tempo for me is a bit too slow. (I'd say 120/130 for this song)
I want to hear the full song though, because that'll sound awesome, though I think until now everything could easily fit into trance. (if I was you, I wouldn't make the other genres in this song, but that's my opinion xD)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.