Be a Supporter!

Credits & Info

Sep 11, 2009 | 1:51 AM EDT
File Info
909.4 KB
59 sec
3.93 / 5.00

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Rated 3.93 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
402 Plays | 33 Downloads
Share Links:
Metal, Rock - General Rock

Author Comments

So, I tried to do a completely different genre on this one. It might not be perfect, but thats why its up here. I'm looking for feedback on how to make this track/future tracks better. Advice is much appreciated!!!!

And as for the name....... I honestly couldn't think of a good one other than ">TK< Refrigerator"




Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

My review, your song.

Opens with distorted lead guitar.

Breif pause, drums come in and the guitar sound like its chorused, but no bass or further accompaniment to the melody is introduced.

Then song progresses, nothing after the little bridge at 0:30ish stands out.

A common problem with songs featuring distorted guitars is that they get this grainy white noise esque sound to them, and it makes focusing on them a bit difficult. Where as say the intro, outro and bridge were done with something less distorted, you'd suddenly create a huge dynamic change in pacing and sound style, and the minute peice you have so far would be far more diverse, and interesting to listen to.

Drums are decent, they're mixed up a bit and sound alright. Might just be my currently bad headphones, but the drum kick was a little bit weak.

Song felt a bit mono, or atleast not utilising stereo to its fullest.

The melody playing I quite liked.

Overall, not bad, but lacking focus.

3/5 7/10

People find this review helpful!
TorkKey responds:

Thank you for the review! I really appreciate all the advice and everything.

I'm going to take everything you said into account when creating another track and/or redoing this one.

"Overall, not bad, but lacking focus." I agree completely. I actually had no idea what I was doing. Just making something that sounded decent. I'm still working on making a song to an idea. I usually come up with an idea/vision to the song. (oops)

As for utilizing stereo, I'm using 2 speakers on my moniter. Lol. I'm working on it though. :)

Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!