My review, your song.
Real short, generic, and not really techno, more trance with poorly mixed drums and a preset clap.
Good job on the succesful loop though.
To be more then frank, I can't stand this type of music. In future work make sure the bass isn't just a lame mimicry of the melody with a simple arpegio. Its a good way to not set yourself apart from other artists.
Ya it's what i was aming for. I was like damn, i bet i could make a really generic sounding loop in like 30 seconds.