Dude
VERY well done. I like this a lot. Normally I don't go outside the same few people that I always listen to because I got tired of hearing shit, but this is really good. You're officially on the list of people I need to listen to more.
One thing, take out the verb on the drums right at the end. When all you have is the drums, that much verb is just overdoing it. Other than that, this is very well created.