i think its to short and i know your still working on it but since the song sounds really good and i probably listened to it for like 12 minutes strait i give it 10/10 5/5
Don't spend a large chunk of your song repeating 4 words. You could get away with that in a longer song, but this is a bit too short to tolerate it. I like where the song sounded like it was going, it was just a bit too short. The ending kinda just cuts off, maybe change "It's a new day" to more of a chorus, which would solve the problem with then ending if added own there. Personally, I'm considering this a work in progress, but hey, it's your work, do (or don't) whatever you want with it. Oh, and profanity will never get you off of newgrounds and into the big-time because you're not a rapper, and I really hope you don't, because this shows potential, but needs a bit of editing work
haha i read all your reviews, thanks so much :)
Yea the short ones are WIP.
Plus i hate the ending need to change some of that.
And i heard the song tonight gonna be a good night or whatever.
And was curious to see if i could do something like that.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.