I think this piece is very well done, although, like Aviuscantor said, it does seem to be a little bland at times. I congratulate you, good sir!
A well written arrangement! Very smooth and flowing, but occasionally sparce, enough so that it would be quite difficult to fit into a half-time show for a marching band. It would make a good ceremony piece, perhaps even something slow to play at graduation or a simmilar event (anything to take time away from pomp and circumstance >_<)
Well written, but perhaps a bit bland at times and lacking contrast. 8/10
I live in the UK and actually wrote this more of a peice for smaller bands such as those in the Traditional Marching Band Association (TYMBA). But thanks anyway =]
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.