The start sounds really good, really similar to the original which is good for a remix. The vocals seem to be a bit sloppy, you should turn the reverb down on them.
The leads sound great, very good for hardstyle!
Just add hardstyle effects and the lot to the song, like reverse crashes.. you know. Look at normal hardstyle songs if you want good examples.
When the kick comes in the kick is good but that bass.. its out of tune.
Listen closely and mod the notes to suit the tune of bass you want. Also look at the original song to see if you have the bass notes right, because it doesn't sound really smooth.
I think this will come out as a good remix :D Just a few minor touches
Keep it up