The rap is so funny! LOL
uhhh... slow it down...
It sounded like you were really trying to catch up with the BPM plus it kinda... sucked... D:>
The beats pretty crazy, and so is your rap. I get that you were trying to rap fast, but that doesn't make up for the lack of lyricism. As far as the verse goes, it was consistent one syllable rhyming with pretty average lyrics. I recommend listening to some Big L and Nas for a while and listen to how they establish their lyrics and rhyme scheme.
cool sonic sound near the end, some words i couldnt catch from ya though
once you train your ears for speed rapping its not too hard lol thank you very much for your review.